<p>Methods: How were study participants selected? &nbsp;It is not enough to say "pretested questionnaires were developed and administered"; What were the questionnaires testing; forexample how was knowledge/practices assessed and categorised?</p><p>Results: Rewrite section for easier intepretation eg &nbsp;"Factors influencing knowledge on AMR are Cadre of respondents (Adjusted Odds Ratio [AOR} = 4.71; 95% Confidence Interval [CI] = 1.41-75.77), Work place (AOR=20.84; CI=2.54-170.77)"what does this mean.</p><p>This is a potentially good study but with poorly written methods &amp; results section.</p><p>&nbsp;</p>