<p>Comments by section by section:</p><p>Title: the title is clear</p><p>Introduction: The background of the abstract introduces the topic and the study objectives. However, &nbsp;it has not mentioned the specific problem(gap statement) that the researchers are trying to solve.</p><p>Methods: The study design was mentioned, however, the sampling procedure is not clear in both quantitative and qualitative aspects, no clarity in the sentence. For example, Variables with<strong> </strong><i><strong>p&amp;lt;0.05</strong></i> were...</p><p>Result: No clear Odds of ratio and CI for determinants of perinatal mortality, not clearly written, it looks like the conclusion section. eg. The low investments in health led to unskilled deliveries, inadequate Health Care Workers, and a lack of supplies and commodities.</p><p>Conclusion: The conclusion has to have the data presented in the result section. However, the data presented in the conclusion is not in the result section.</p>