<p>The objective of this study does not address the problem (elevated blood pressure) as documented in the background. It is a broad objective. Knowing how many records were sampled from each health facility would have been nice. The methods need to be clearer, especially for the regression model. Was it just two variables that were fitted into the model? I suggest you compare the difference in the means of blood pressure using a suitable statistical test. The conclusion does not align with the recommendation.</p>