<p>The topic is interesting9NCDs) however the authors findings and conclusions are devoid of concrete comparisons to make the abstract stand out from the usual descriptive analysis of Hypertension cases, for instance &nbsp;Improvements to mention the magnitude and frequency of NCD screening would be key in understanding the increasing trend of Hypertension cases, for now its not clear whether he increment could be due to intensified screening or actual new cases.Also there is no mention of detailed distribution of cases beyond the gender as well as a befitting conclusion as per the aim of the study.</p><p>The authors main focus is on uncontrolled diabetes in the end,making it a one sided focus. The abstract can still be made better with clarity on the results and conclusions</p>