<p>The Abstract has a similar resemblance with many other malaria outbreak response studies done, however</p><ul><li>For it to be unique , the Author needs to explicitly describe if there any predisposing factors associated with the category aged 15+ years</li><li>Alsofailure to adhere to &nbsp;preventive measures is not the primary cause of malaria attacks , the author needs to explain the top risk factors in the region and further describe /assess the level of adherence to preventive measures mentioned in order to make a good conclusion.</li></ul><p>These categories of abstract are key in malaria surveillance however they lack indepth understanding of lifestyle practices which would make the study more richer.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>The AUTHOR should improve the abstract</p>