<p>title:</p><p>High Impact Communication Strategies..... what is meant by High impact? what specifically were the strategies? &nbsp;High impact looks abstract and does not reflect what was done in this study.&nbsp;</p><p>Background</p><p>Background is too long just like the entire abstract, keep to the gap and objectives for this study in the background.</p><p>The study objectives are confusing... what exactly is the study seeking to achieve? you need to come clear with the objectives</p><p>methods</p><p>too long, summarize the points and focus the design use in this study.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Results&nbsp;</p><p>too long, reduced and focus on the study objectives, as it stands its difficult ti link the results and the objectives&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>