<p>Title: recast. This is an experimental study but the title already showed a bias. Title can read 'The effect of ..........</p><p>Methods: &nbsp;Author should say upfront that this is an intervention/experimental study. The time between 1). Baseline and the intervention and 2). Intervention and evaluation. The duration of the intervention should also be stated.</p><p>Results: Clarify number of participants in the study. Is it 266 or 466?</p><p>Explain your abbreviation when used for the first time.</p>