<p>Thank you for your abstract:</p><p>Comments:</p><p>The method should be mixed since you used both quantitative and qualitative approaches. Also state which specific mixed method suits your study best. in the method section Indicate the level of significance and how you extracted the themes including the software.</p><p>Results: be consistent with the CI units (either % or decimals) In Epidemiology we mostly prefer to report in decimals like the way you have done with most of your results. Double check your first sentence in the results section.</p><p>Recommendations need to be specific: Wat do you mean by government? you would want to specify here... the directorate/division/department</p><p>Besides the comments, I would recommend this work because the problem is a huge concern globally.</p>