<p><strong>Background and rationale for study: </strong>You want to instvesigate cases of dog bites.&nbsp; What can be the problem of dog bites&nbsp;; it’s probably rabies cases. So, in this partie you shall put argument of existence of rabies cases in brazzaville. You must add &nbsp;key antecedent data for these situation. the objective(s) of the study is to describe the situation in order to fight againt something</p><p><strong>Appropriateness of methods:&nbsp;</strong> For the overall study design described for the study i suggest cross sectionnel . You make a literature review and collect data from register using a document ( questionnaire&nbsp;?). The variables of the study are…………You can add statistical calculation</p><p><strong>Presentation of results: </strong>It is good to present your results with the numbers accompanying the proportions 30% (82 people bitten by domestic dogs) and it is this group that we are talking about vaccinated or not?? Stray dogs and indeterminate dogs are the same group, otherwise we get lost in your three groups of biting dogs. So reduce 85% to the absolute number to help understand because a dog can bite two people or even three. How many biting dogs do we have? For age, it is good to take the median. I don't understand: you have a distribution of bitten people according to the district of origin in the two health centers or what (biting dogs)?</p><p><strong>Conclusions and interpretations of results : </strong>the conclusion and interpretation are not based on the data presented. the conclusions of the study appear Does not sufficiently valid and reliable to serve as a basis for the conclusions and for taking public health action .</p><p><strong>Public health significance: </strong>This study will contribute to the improvement of public health. It addresses an important health issue. The recommendations do not follow from the results of the study</p><p><strong>Overall clarity of the abstract : </strong>We have a logical sequence within the sections but a writing. Review the method, results and conclusion</p>