<p><strong>Background</strong>: Last sentence is a repetition of the third sentence. consider dropping it.&nbsp;</p><p><strong>Methods</strong>: The phrase "analysis of129 records" should be revised and put appropriate spacing of words. Rephrase some words appropriately, we normally begin with "from" and we end with "to". e.g "median time from diagnosis to death"</p><p><strong>Conclusion</strong>: Should follow chronological flow of results. Some conclusions are not drawn from results e.g. "Majority of elderly were living with comorbidities", but in the results no where we can find distribution of comorbidities in relation to age. What has been shown is just the magnitude of the commonest comorbidities.</p><p><strong>General comment</strong>: Should revise the language for overall clarity and avoid unnecessary repetition of sentences</p>