<p><strong>Background</strong>: Would be better to mention the magnitude of the problem. What proportion of men present late at HIV clinics?</p><p><strong>Methods</strong>: Mentioning "Adult men" is not very clear on the cut-off age. Tell the reader who are those adults. Is it &nbsp;14 years and above, 18 years and above? etc</p><p><strong>Results</strong>: If you say the late presentation was higher among men aged 18-24 years compared to 25-34 years and aPR = 0.13, it is confusing. Looks like reference group flipped and now younger age group 18-24 years is protective against late presentation. Presentation of results should be revised.</p>