<p>The Author did a good job with data use and findings however the abstract lacks clarity in the new knowledge being brough on board, the findings and conclusions are known causes of mortality among Covid -19 patients hence there is no unique phenomenon being described in the abstract.The results are the expected and could be better polished to bring out a possible strategy for addressing these pre disposing factors .</p><p>This abstract can form a good problem statement of its own&nbsp;</p>